Dear Sir,
I should be very grateful if you would let me have information about admission to your university and details of any scholarships that may be offered to students from other countries.
I have finished my middle school studies here and hold the Middle School graduation certificate. Last year I was elected to the school‘s honor society. And I was editor of the school yearbook.
I would like to go to your university because it emphasizes learning. I also feel that it will provide me with greater opportunities to participate in extracurricular activities such as dramatics and writing. I hope to get a place for next autumn.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
YuanYuan
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I admire you and your effort
Thank you for your comments, I will work harder!